5. Should Codes of Ethics for civil servants and politicians be made legally enforceable. Critically examine.

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Date January 12, 2018
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5. Should Codes of Ethics for civil servants and politicians be made legally enforceable. Critically examine.

क्या सिविल सेवकों और राजनेताओं के लिए नैतिकता के कोड कानूनी रूप से लागू होने चाहिए? समलोचनात्मक जांच करें।

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Ali

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- IAS baba
  
  good try but need some serious improvement in -ive section
- IASbaba
  
  Dear Ali,
  You started well,definition could have been better,kindly write why code of ethics is needed,kindly justify arguments with examples,this paper is of examples,later arguments are correct,overall an average answer,keep writing!
Sandhya

But in India there is no code of ethics for civil servants. There are only code of conduct rules.
It has been recommended by arc to have a code of ethics.
If it does not exist even, the question about its enforcement is a bit out of context
Sabyasachi Sharma

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- Psycho_Logy
  
  Very good way of presentation. You wrote very relevant points. Just add some examples like despite of model code of conduct. Also i found some words difficult to read, so please ensure legibility while writing. Although your handwriting is good and not an issue.
- IASbaba
  
  Dear Swati,
  Good approach,points and presentation,need to leave more distance between words,other aspects are good,a good answer,keep writing!
  - Anand
    
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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Bagath,
  Write more crisp and to the point introduction,later arguments are good write more arguments,second part require better arguments few are good,kindly write a better conclusion,overall an average answer,keep writing!
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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Delhi,
  Need to write a better definition,kindly write more crisp arguments,need to write issues first,write more arguments in both the aspects and write examples,need better structuring and content,overall an average answer,keep writing!
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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Rinki,
  You started well,later arguments are good need to write issues arising need for code of ethics first,write examples along with arguments to justify points,need to write a better conclusion,you can present your answer better,kindly write by drawing side margins,overall a good attempt,keep writing!
ASHFAQ KASHMIRI

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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Ashfaq,
  Introduction is correct need to write simpler,later arguments are correct kindly write more effective illustrations,kindly write examples to justify arguments,write a better conclusion,need to be suggestive,overall a good attempt,keep writing!
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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Sameer,
  introduction is correct could have been better,later arguments are also correct,need to write issues first,write more and specific examples,need better arguments in second part,write a better conclusion,keep writing!
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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Priyanka,
  write a better introduction,need to write more diverse arguments in both the parts,write short and crisp example and write more examples and issues,need further reading,keep practicing!
Jayesh Mohite

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Gurpreet Singh

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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Gurpreet,
  Introduction is correct could have been better,need to write precise answer,write short and crisp arguments,write more issues involved,structure answer better and write a better conclusion,need further reading,keep writing!
Resolute Monk

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- IASbaba
  
  Dear resolute,
  Introduction is correct,later arguments are correct but need to write diverse arguments,substantiate with examples,especially the second part require more dimensions,need to write a suggestive conclusion,refer to second ARC etc,overall an average answer,keep writing!
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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Sharad,
  You started well,later arguments are good,kindly write ethical issues involved with civil servants and politicians first,need to write better arguments in second part,approach in conclusion is good but need better arguments,overall an average answer,keep writing!
prasan

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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Prasan,
  need to write a better definition,later arguments are correct but you drifted away from the asked aspect,kindly write as per question,need to write issues,pros and cons for code of ethics and its enforcement,need further reading and writing!
Abhimanyu

A code of ethics outline the mission and values of the business or organization, how professionals are supposed to approach problems, the ethical principles based on the organization’s core values and the standards to which the professional is held.
One can prescribe/enforce the procedure to enact some law/perform certain task in certain way which is .But executing one’s duty ethically solely comes from within. It is driven by the passion one show towards his duty.

Ex:Consider the case where a civil servant validate certain contract and award it to eligible bidder without compromising his integrity.Many companies might be eligible as per the rules. If he is influenced by his personal interests and make corrupt judgement it might result in inefficient execution of his duty and project.Though decision is correct as per the rules but not as per ethics.

Laws decide certain action right or wrong. But ethical values like integrity,honesty,compassion cannot be measured by any parameters.

Instead of enforcing code of conduct legally it can be done like
By introducing the governance system which is infallible,transparent through laws like RTI which can disclose all the details in transparent manner.
Performance based promotion/rewards which encourages one to execute his duty without corrupt intentions.
- IASbaba
  
  Dear Abhimanyu,
  Kindly write short and crisp definition,need to write more arguments in need for code of ethics,write separate arguments for politicians,need more and better examples,write them short,kindly write on paper and upload image for better practice,overall an average answer,keep writing!
parvez

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- IASbaba
  
  Dear Parvez,
  You started well,definition could have been better,you have good content need to have better alignment and structuring of arguments,kindly focus on keyword critically examine,write other perspective as well,overall an average answer,keep writing!

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